Sounds good to me. And, also, don't mind my nitpicking. I asked ChatGPT to write a summary for me, and it did a terrible job. :-/ Part of the problem is that it absolutely insists on inserting verbiage that promotes the idea that pollution is bad or that players should be learning how to be good to the environment. And I can't get it to stop. chuckle
Anyway, here is something I wrote that may work better. You don't have to use it. It's your mod, and I'm just a random nitpicker. But, if you want to:
In vanilla Factorio, water absorbs much less pollution than many other kinds of terrain and that seems at odds with reality, give that many of our pollutants end up in the water in the real world. Heck, the oceans even absorb much of the atmospheric CO2 we generate.
This mod increases the pollution absorption of water to better reflect reality. It also has deep water absorb more pollution than shallow water, while "saturated" green water absorbs less overall.